to Ranjivwhat a cool winter poem i liked it. You need work on it to ryme and put more detail in it.By your buddy Jahmin
To RavjivI liked your poem and its cool. I liked the part wheen you said the shivering legs part. You need to work on it to rhyme and more detail By your buddy Jahmin
to Ranjiv
ReplyDeletewhat a cool winter poem i liked it. You need work on it to ryme and put more detail in it.
By your buddy Jahmin
To Ravjiv
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem and its cool. I liked the part wheen you said the shivering legs part. You need to work on it to rhyme and more detail
By your buddy Jahmin